New development page on xfce.org

[Mike Massonnet]

Le 7 octobre 2009 11:06, Jérôme Guelfucci <jeromeg at xfce.org> a écrit :
> Diego Ongaro wrote:
>>
>> 2009/10/4 Jérôme Guelfucci <jeromeg at xfce.org>:
>>>
>>> I refactored the development page on xfce.org. The result can be seen on
>>>  http://mocha.xfce.org/development/, it will available with the normal
>>> address once the mirrors are synced.
>>>
>>> As usual, suggestions and feedback are welcome. It would also be cool if
>>> a
>>> native English speaker could review my text, I'm sure there is room for
>>> improvement.
>>
>> Cool, I took a stab at it. I tried to keep the page structure and the
>> content the same, but I messed with a lot of the sentence structure
>> and wording.
>>
>> I've attached both a diff of my changes (touching the entire file) and
>> the new file. Just use the one that's more convenient for you.
>>
>> -Diego
>
> Thanks a lot Diego, I just applied your changes. It looks indeed "more
> English" with your changes.

I take it that it couldn't look "less english" given the location of
Diego, right? :-)

> Cheers,
>
> Jérôme

-- 
Mike